October Girl

Hey, my best piece of advice is think about something that scares you. Or something that scares others. Example: I am scared of.... Thunder. Name: Thunderella-Trusomose-Thunderus something like that.

(Chelsea Luna) I think I'm gonna lay off the coffee. You go ahead." I smiled and I was perfectly awre of thos bitches scoping him out, finally I kissed him ...

(Chelsea Luna) "Look for a job?" I smiled. "Something better to do." He smiled "Let's get coffee? And talk?" I asked. (Marc Luna) "No she won't lose anything. It's me ...

(Chelsea Luna) I was so angry-at myself more than the photographer I did something I should have done a long time ago. I walked up to him, throwing his camera ...

(Chelsea Luna) "That's was great coming from you." I smiled. "I'm not feeling that. I'm sorry. If I wanted a picture of two people kissing I would bring Britney Spears ...

(Chelsea Luna) "Is there another baiting suit I can try on?" I asked. "Uh, no. That's the only one we have in your size, you're too skinny. You need to ...

(Chelsea Luna) "No, I'm not leaving you." I said. "I can deal with this guy." I said. "I just-I don't." He kept trying to talk but his teeth were clenched ...

(Chelsea Luna) "Be my guest." I said smiling. "I thought we were selling perfume." I said not seeing any perfume in sight. "Yes well, we have to take test photos ...

(Chelsea Luna) "Yeah, yeah I'll be fine. And if not they can put me in an abulance and I'll probably remember it this time." I joked. "That's not funny." He ...

***ah yeah you guys might have to burry me, before I can you know.... come back***

(Chelsea Luna) I nodded he held me against him the whole time. "Wait what time is it?" I asked. "Ah it ah, 10:30 AM." He said. "C'mon we have to ...

(Chelsea luna) I was trembling so violently as if someone had shot me. I just out of no where started crying, because of Marc he hadn't made me cry since ...

So you need writing tips? Or a crit?

I must agree with Mad on this subject please change it, then ask people to take you seriously.

(Marc Luna) I was being a jerk to Sybyla and that wasn't fair. I held her and for a second I just wanted to pretend everything was going to be ...